Common FCE Essay Writing Mistakes

1 Introduction

Writing Coach Jenny knows that many students struggle with FCE essay writing under exam pressure. Poor preparation often leads to common mistakes in task achievement, cohesion, and appropriate register. Let’s look at Maria’s attempt at an FCE essay to identify typical errors students make when they’re not properly prepared.

2 FCE – ESSAY – Poor Writing Example

Should mobile phones be banned in schools?

I think mobile phones in schools is a big problem nowadays. Some people say its good and some people say its bad. I will write about this.

Firstly phones are very distracting in class. Students play games and go on social media when they should study. Also they can cheat in tests with phones.

On the other hand phones can be useful. Like if theres an emergency you can call your parents. And some apps are good for learning stuff.

In my opinion I think phones should not be banned because students need them. Teachers should just make rules about when to use them. Its important to learn responsibility.

In conclusion, phones are both good and bad but banning them is not the answer because students need to learn how to use them properly and teachers should make rules about this.

3 How Many Errors Did You Spot?

Before we analyze Maria’s essay in detail, take a moment to identify the problems you notice. Look for issues with punctuation, paragraph structure, formal language, and supporting evidence. How many different types of errors can you find?