FCE Review Writing Task – Common Mistakes Analysis

1 Introduction

Under exam pressure, even capable students can produce writing that falls short of FCE requirements. Common issues include poor organization, informal language, basic vocabulary, and insufficient critical analysis. Let’s examine a student response that demonstrates these typical problems.

2 FCE Review – Poor Writing Example

You have seen a film recently. Write a review of the film for your school’s English-language website. You should include information about the plot, acting and special effects, and say whether you would recommend it to other students.

Write your review in 140-190 words.

Film Review: Avatar 2

I went to see Avatar 2 yesterday and it was really really good. The special efects were amazing and the story was interesting. The actors did good job and everything looked nice. The film is about people on another planet who fight with bad guys who want to destroy their home. The blue aliens use animals and nature to fight.

The best thing about the film was the visuals because they were awesome. The worst thing was maybe that it was quite long (like 3 hours!!!) and some bits were boring. But mostly I enjoyed it alot.

I think people should watch this film because its very good and has lots of action. The ticket was expensive but worth it. If you liked the first Avatar you will probably like this one to.

I give it 9/10 stars!!!

3 How Many Errors Did You Spot?

Before we analyze this review in detail, take a moment to identify the problems you notice. Consider these aspects: