FCE Essay Writing: Common Mistakes to Avoid

1 Introduction

Under exam pressure, many students struggle to produce well-structured essays that meet FCE requirements. Common pitfalls include poor coherence, inappropriate register, and weak argumentation. Let’s examine a typical example of how NOT to write an FCE essay, focusing on Maria’s response to the question: ‘Is social media having a negative impact on young people? Write an essay discussing your views.’

2 Task Type: FCE 'Essay' task – Writing Mistakes: How not to Write – Poor Writing Example

In my opinion I think that social media is very very bad for young people today. First of all, it makes them addicted and they cant stop using it all the time. Like they are always on their phones checking Instagram and stuff.

Secondly social media makes people feel bad about themselfs because they see perfect lives of others. Its not fair and makes depression. Also cyber bullying is a big problem nowadays and lots of teenagers suffer from it.

To conclude, I think social media should be banned because its too dangerous for young people and they should do other things instead like reading books or going outside with friends etc…

3 How Many Errors Did You Spot?

Before we analyze this essay in detail, take a moment to identify the problems you notice. Consider issues with organization, language accuracy, and academic style. How well does this essay substantiate its arguments? What’s missing in terms of proper essay structure?