FCE Essay Writing: Common Mistakes to Avoid
1 Introduction
Under exam pressure, even well-prepared students can produce substandard writing. Today, we’ll examine a common scenario where Maria attempts the FCE essay task without proper preparation or understanding of the assessment criteria. Her response demonstrates several typical mistakes that can significantly impact the final score.
Key Terms
- substandard
- below the required quality or standard
- assessment criteria
- the specific standards used to evaluate exam performance
2 Poor Writing Example
Task: Write an essay discussing whether mobile phones should be banned in schools. Write 140-190 words.
Maria’s response shows multiple inadequacies in terms of structure, vocabulary, and coherence. Notice how the writing lacks formal register and proper argumentation.
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Key Terms
- inadequacies
- failures to reach an acceptable standard
- coherence
- logical connection between ideas
- formal register
- appropriate level of language formality
- argumentation
- the process of developing and presenting logical arguments
3 How Many Errors Did You Spot?
Before we analyze Maria’s essay in detail, take a moment to identify the main problems. Consider issues with organization, vocabulary choice, and grammatical accuracy. How many serious errors can you spot? What impact do they have on the overall effectiveness of the essay?
Key Terms
- organization
- the way ideas are structured and presented
- grammatical accuracy
- correct use of language structures and rules