FCE Review Writing Task – Common Mistakes Analysis

1 Introduction

Under exam pressure, even capable students can produce writing that falls short of FCE requirements. Common issues include informal language, basic vocabulary choices, and poor organization. Let’s examine a review that demonstrates these typical problems, written by Maria during a practice test.

2 FCE Review – Poor Writing Example

Your task is to write a review of a film you have seen recently for your school’s English-language magazine.

Write your review in 140-190 words.

Maria’s Response:

New Movie Review: Avatar 2

I went to see this movie yesterday and it was really really good. The special efects were amazing and I couldn’t believe my eyes when I saw it. The actors were good to. The story was about people on another planet who fight with eachother. The main character was Jake Sully who wants to save the planet.

The film was long (more than 3 hours) but I didn’t get bored. Some parts were a bit slow but mostly it was exciting. The action scenes were cool and the music was nice. The ending was good to.

I think everyone should watch this film because its very good and interesting. You will enjoy it alot. The ticket was expensive (12£) but it was worth it. I give it 5 stars!!!

3 How Many Errors Did You Spot?

Before we analyze this review in detail, take a moment to identify the problems you notice. Consider these aspects:
– Is the language appropriate for a magazine review?
– How sophisticated is the vocabulary?
– Are there any spelling or grammar mistakes?
– Is the review well-organized with clear paragraphs?
– Does it give enough specific details about the film?